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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. XNAq
The pie diagrams depict how much part of water applied solely for three reasons in the five continents where Asia was divided into two regions. It can be seen from the sketch supreme use of water happened due to husbandry in Central Asia and South-East Asia(88% and 81% respectively). Alternatively, the least amount was applied to the industrial sector to Central Asia(5%). However, Central and South-East Asia consumed the same quantity of water for the household, South-East Asia projected (12- 7)% = 5% more water for mills. On the other hand, North America and Europe supplied approximately similar amount in the case of industrialization (48% and 53% respectively). Moreover, in Africa, Central Asia and South-East Asia, South America used nearly alike share for husbandry ( 84%, 88%, 81%, 71% serially). On the contrary, the maximum continent's people left the smallest content owing to home (South Asia 7%, Central Asia 7%, Africa 9% etc). Besides, more water used by central Asia because of farming and that is 88%-33%= 55% more than Europe. Furthermore, Central Asia used 53%- 5% = 48% less water than Europe for the sake of factories. In conclusion, cultivation was the vital sector for supplying water. Besides, mills are another field where people used a great part of water.
The pie diagrams depict how much part of
water
applied
solely
for three reasons in the five continents where Asia
was divided
into two regions.

It can be
seen
from the sketch supreme
use
of
water
happened due to husbandry in
Central
Asia and South-East Asia(88% and 81%
respectively
).
Alternatively
, the least amount
was applied
to the industrial sector to
Central
Asia(5%).

However
,
Central
and South-East Asia consumed the same quantity of
water
for the household, South-East Asia projected (
12- 7
)% = 5% more
water
for mills.
On the other hand
, North America and Europe supplied approximately similar amount in the case of industrialization (48% and 53%
respectively
).
Moreover
, in Africa,
Central
Asia and South-East Asia, South America
used
nearly
alike share for husbandry
(
84%, 88%, 81%, 71%
serially
).
On the contrary
, the maximum continent's
people
left
the smallest content owing to home (South Asia 7%,
Central
Asia 7%, Africa 9% etc).
Besides
, more
water
used
by
central Asia
because
of farming and
that is
88%-33%= 55% more than Europe.
Furthermore
,
Central
Asia
used
53%- 5% = 48% less
water
than Europe for the sake of factories.

In conclusion
, cultivation was the vital sector for supplying
water
.
Besides
, mills are another field where
people
used
a great part of
water
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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