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The graphic provides information about natural, or chemical fuel types of electricity are used in 2005 by five different Asia states.

The graphic provides information about natural, or chemical fuel types of electricity are used in 2005 by five different Asia states. K8A9
The graphic provides information about natural, or chemical fuel types of electricity are used in 2005 by five different Asia states. Overall, every single state has the most energy to use their electricity's needs. The countries illustrated that their natural forces in the states territories. All governments have a leader position on a classification without Japan. Furthermore, Malaysia and Japan do not have possess qualities similarly because one of them leads to coal, and lignite type of class, another one has the most developed on nuclear field. Moreover, both Malaysia also Japan are remained similar percentages according to the table absent the classification of other. On the other hand, other states, which are called Thailand, South Korea, are demonstrated that the petroleum manufacturing is the best manufacturer by Thailand, as well as South Korea is led to hydro, and wind products for their electricities. Moreover, the nuclear is the lowest in Thailand than all of them
The graphic provides information about natural, or chemical fuel types of electricity are
used
in 2005 by five
different
Asia states.

Overall
, every single state has the most energy to
use
their electricity's needs. The countries illustrated that their natural forces in the states territories. All
governments
have a leader position on a classification without Japan.

Furthermore
, Malaysia and Japan do not have
possess
qualities
similarly
because
one of them leads to coal, and lignite type of
class
, another one has the most developed on nuclear field.
Moreover
, both Malaysia
also
Japan
are remained
similar percentages according to the table absent the classification of other.

On the other hand
, other states, which
are called
Thailand, South Korea,
are demonstrated
that the petroleum manufacturing is the best manufacturer by Thailand,
as well
as South Korea
is led
to hydro, and wind products for their
electricities
.
Moreover
, the nuclear is the lowest in Thailand than all of them
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IELTS academic The graphic provides information about natural, or chemical fuel types of electricity are used in 2005 by five different Asia states.

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4 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
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