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The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Two charts showing trends in consumption of fast food

The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. rjyl
The pie chart illustrates the consumption of hamburgers, fish, chips, and pizza, which were the most popular fast foods in the united kingdom, between the years 1970 and 1990. Overall, the consuming of fish, which was the highest, chips and hamburger increased over the given period, in contrast to pizza which had been decreasing. Significantly, fish, chips, and hamburger were less than 100 in 1970, but they slightly grew to almost 150 and 100 in 1980 respectively. While fish and chips jumped dramatically in the next years to 500, hamburger climbed to nearly 300. On the other hand, The consumption of pizza declined from 300 in 1970 to 200 in 1985, with a slight increase in 1990.
The pie chart illustrates the consumption of hamburgers, fish, chips, and pizza, which were the most popular
fast
foods in the
united kingdom
, between the years 1970 and 1990.

Overall
, the consuming of fish, which was the highest, chips and hamburger increased over the
given
period,
in contrast
to pizza which had been decreasing.

Significantly
, fish, chips, and hamburger were less than 100 in 1970,
but
they
slightly
grew to almost 150 and 100 in 1980
respectively
. While fish and chips jumped
dramatically
in the
next
years to 500, hamburger climbed to
nearly
300.

On the other hand
, The consumption of pizza declined from 300 in 1970 to 200 in 1985, with a slight increase in 1990.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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