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The tabular chart illustrates the information regarding different five countries, customers spent money on basic needs in year 2002 .

The tabular chart illustrates the information regarding different five countries, customers spent money on basic needs in year 2002. m88WO

It can be apparently seen that in the category of food, beverages and tobacco, the highest amount spent by individuals of Turkey, as well as, Ireland customers also used large amount and Italy, Spain and Sweden utilised approximately same value that was 16. 36%, 18. 80% and 15. 77%, respectively. Moreover customers of Ireland and Spain expended about same value (6. 51%) in the field of clothing and footwear. In addition, the consumers of Italy spent huge money for purchasing these commodities. Furthermore, in the field of entertainment and education purposes, Turkey utilised vast amount 4. 35% that was doubled from Ireland and Spain’s expenditure value. Italy and Sweden, customers spent same money in this field which was (3. 22%). Overall, it had been observed that the customers from these all given nations spent less amount on leisure and education purposes as compared with other remaining two categories.

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