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The tables illustrate how much financial transactions of Faritrade-labelled coffee and bananas were made in 1999 and 2004 in five countries namely, the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.

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The tables illustrate how much financial transactions of Faritrade-labelled coffee and bananas were made in 1999 and 2004 in five countries namely, the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. Overall, it is observed that the UK and Switzerland spent more than other countries in terms of the purchase of coffee and bananas. For the remaining countries, it was significantly lower than two leading countries. First thing that catchesone’s eyes is that coffee and banana expenditure of the UK skyrocketed. Coffee sales increased from 1. 5 million euros to 20 million euros and the sales of bananas experienced a five-fold ascent starting from 1 million euros. On top of that, switzerland’s coffee expenditure doubled and reached up to 6 millons. Furthermore, amount that was spent on bananas approximately tripled and became 47 million euros. Coffee sales of Denmark and Sweden did not quite change in the mentioned years. Initially the former was slightly lower than 2 millions and reached up the that point. Moreover, the numbers for the latter were almost half of it in both years. Additionally, in the same category the expenditure of belgium soared and reached to 1. 7 million euros from 1 million euros. Banana sales in belgium was 0. 6 million euros initially; although it reached 4 millions. However, the sales halved in Sweden and became a million euros. The same can be told for Denmark; therefore, it decreased to 0. 9 from 2 millions.
The tables illustrate how much financial transactions of
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Faritrade-labelled
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coffee
and bananas
were made
in 1999 and 2004 in five countries
namely
, the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.

Overall
, it
is observed
that the UK and Switzerland spent more than other countries in terms of the
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purchase
of
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coffee
and bananas. For the remaining countries, it was
significantly
lower than two leading countries.

First
thing that
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catchesone
’s eyes is that
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coffee
and banana expenditure of the UK skyrocketed.
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Coffee
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sales
increased from 1. 5
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million
euros to 20
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million
euros and the
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sales
of bananas experienced a five-fold ascent starting from 1
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million
euros.
On top of that
,
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switzerland
’s
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coffee
expenditure doubled and
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reached
up to 6
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millons
.
Furthermore
, amount that
was spent
on bananas approximately tripled and became 47
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million
euros.

Coffee
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sales
of Denmark and Sweden did not quite
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change
in the mentioned years.
Initially
the former was
slightly
lower than 2
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millions
and
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reached
up the that point.
Moreover
, the numbers for the latter were almost half of it in both years.
Additionally
, in the same category the expenditure of
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belgium
soared and
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reached
to 1. 7
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million
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million
euros. Banana
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sales
in
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belgium
was 0. 6
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million
euros
initially
; although it
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reached
4
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millions
.
However
, the
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sales
halved in Sweden and became a
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million
euros. The same can be
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told
for Denmark;
therefore
, it decreased to 0. 9 from 2
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millions
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