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the map below show the changes took place at the resort of Templeton from 2000 to 2013.

the map below show the changes took place at the resort of Templeton from 2000 to 2013. XGjp8
The map shows the developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 2000 to 2013. Overall, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly urban landscape. In 2000, the town was a much greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual houses, but during the next 13 years, the town experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the southwest sides of the river were cut down with all the houses along the sea being knocked down and replaced by blocks of flats. Moreover, a new industrial estate with factories and supermarkets sprang up around the river. Only a few trees north of the river remained. A number of new skyscrapers were set up around the lake. Further developments were the construction of an airport near the school and a new stretch of railway from the river running directly west. A ferry was also built at the mouth of the sea.
The map
shows
the developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from 2000 to 2013.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a
change
from a
largely
rural to a
mainly
urban landscape.

In 2000, the town was a much greener residential area with
a large number of
trees and individual
houses
,
but
during the
next
13 years, the town experienced a number of dramatic
changes
. The most noticeable is that
all of the
southwest sides of the river were
cut
down with all the
houses
along the sea
being knocked
down and replaced by blocks of flats.
Moreover
, a new industrial estate with factories and supermarkets sprang up around the river.

Only
a few trees north of the river remained. A number of new skyscrapers
were set
up around the lake.
Further
developments were the construction of an airport near the school and a new stretch of railway from the river running
directly
west. A ferry was
also
built at the mouth of the sea.
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