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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables provide information on the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney over a determined weekend in December 2018. Overall, as shown in the tables, regarding the temperatures, London was colder than Sydney as well as there is a difference between them in daylight hours. Temperature in London was fluctuated during the three given days. In contrast, there is a rapidly increasing in temperature in Syndey over the same days. Meanwhile, there is a huge difference in temperatures between these two cities. Regarding the hours of daylight, in London the day started at 8: 05, 8: 06 in the given days respectivly. All thought the end of the day rose slightly in these days and started at 15: 57. In case of Syndey, the starting of the day was early. It was at 5: 45 in the first two days and grown up slowly in the last day. As shown in the table, the sunrise of Syndey was 20: 06 and increase gradually in the second day and stable at the third day.
The tables provide information on the
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temperatures
and hours of daylight in London and Sydney over a determined weekend in December 2018.

Overall
, as shown in the tables, regarding the
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temperatures
, London was colder than Sydney
as well
as there is a difference between them in daylight hours.

Temperature in London
was fluctuated
during the three
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given
days.
In contrast
, there is a
rapidly
increasing in
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temperature
in
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Syndey
over the same days. Meanwhile, there is a huge difference in
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temperatures
between these two cities.

Regarding the hours of daylight, in London the day
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started
at 8: 05, 8: 06 in the
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given
days
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respectivly
. All
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thought
the
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end
of the day rose
slightly
in these days and
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started
at 15: 57.

In case of
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Syndey
, the starting of the day was early. It was at 5: 45 in the
first
two days and grown up
slowly
in the last day. As shown in the table, the sunrise of
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Syndey
was 20: 06 and increase
gradually
in the second day and stable at the third day.
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IELTS academic The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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