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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of imports of products (coffee and tea) by Canada, US, UK and Germany. The amounts of tea that Canada and the US receive is similar and these ratios make up 20 000 tones. However, the UK imported 30 000 tones tea and this number is the highest contribution among the countries. Despite this, Germany’s proportion is medium one rather than other countries and this comprises 40 000 tons of tea. In importing coffee, Canada and the US also receive the same quantity of coffee. While importing coffee is higher than tea two times. The UK’S import of coffee is the lowest amount, though the contribution of the tea is the highest among the three countries. Germany imports more level of coffee than the other 3 countries and the level of this country is 40 000 tones. Overall, it can be seen that the highest contribution of tea is in the UK, while the lowest one in the coffee. The biggest number of coffee import is in Germany.
The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of
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imports
of products
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(coffee
and
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tea)
by Canada, US, UK and Germany.

The amounts of
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tea
that Canada and the US receive is similar and these ratios
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make
up 20 000 tones.
However
, the UK imported 30 000 tones
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tea
and this number is the highest contribution among the
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countries
. Despite this, Germany’s proportion is medium one
rather
than other
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countries
and this comprises 40 000 tons of tea.

In importing
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coffee
, Canada and the US
also
receive the same quantity of
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coffee
.
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While
importing
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coffee
is higher than
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tea
two times. The UK’S
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import
of
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coffee
is the lowest amount, though the contribution of the
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tea
is the highest among the three
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countries
. Germany
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imports
more level of
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coffee
than the other 3
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countries
and the level of this
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country
is 40 000 tones.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the highest contribution of
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tea
is in the UK, while the lowest one in the
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coffee
. The biggest number of
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coffee
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import
is in Germany.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries.

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6.5
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