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The chart displays the number of tea and coffee imported by Canada, the UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes.

The chart displays the number of tea and coffee imported by Canada, the UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. As to the amount of imported tea, It is clear that the UK imported much more tea than each other countries. The UK had the highest number of imported tea approximately 16000 tonnes in 2007, the figure of tea imported by the USA was the next (around 9000 tonnes) and Germany ranked the third (6000 tonnes), Canada came last with 4000 tonnes. For the quantity of coffee, it can be seen that Canada was the country which imported most coffee about 9000 tonnes in 2007, which was followed by the USA (approximately 7000 tonnes), Germany was listed the third (around 5000 tonnes) and the UK amounted to 4000, the minimum figure. Overall, it is obvious that except for Canada, the other three nations imported more tea than coffee. And in the UK, tea gained much more popular than coffee.
The chart displays the number of
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and
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imported
by Canada, the UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes.

As to the amount of
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imported
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tea
, It is
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clear
that the UK
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imported
much more
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tea
than each other countries. The UK had the highest number of
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imported
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tea
approximately 16000 tonnes in 2007, the figure of
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tea
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imported
by the USA was the
next
(around 9000 tonnes) and Germany ranked the third (6000 tonnes), Canada came last with 4000 tonnes.

For the quantity of
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coffee
, it can be
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seen
that Canada was the country which
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imported
most
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coffee
about 9000 tonnes in 2007, which
was followed
by the USA (approximately 7000 tonnes), Germany
was listed
the third (around 5000 tonnes) and the UK amounted to 4000, the minimum figure.

Overall
, it is obvious that
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except for
Canada, the other three nations
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imported
more
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tea
than
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coffee
. And in the UK,
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tea
gained much more popular than
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coffee
.
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IELTS academic The chart displays the number of tea and coffee imported by Canada, the UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes.

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