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The tables exhibit information sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in the years 199 and 2004 in five diverging European countries. It is evident that the figure for bananas in UK in 2004 was the highest while that of bananas in Belgium in 1999 was the lowest. Also noteworthy is that the data for coffee increased during the timescale, whereas that for bananas in two countries witnessed a decrease. According to the graphic data, the sales of coffee in UK increased dramatically from 1. 5 to 20, whereas that in Sweden climbed slowly by only under 0. 5 million of euros, which was the same as in two other countries Denmark and Belgium between 1999 and 2004. The figure for Switzerland witnessed a steady growth of 2 million in the same period given. Similarly, there was a substantial rise in sales from 15 million of euros to 47 million in UK between 1999 and 2004. The figure for Switzerland and Belgium underwent a moderate climb of under 5 million. On the other hand, the data for Sweden and Denmark decreased slightly by roughly 1%.

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 noteworthy is that the data for coffee increased during the timescale, whereas that for bananas in two countries witnessed a decrease.

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 of euros, which was the same as in two other countries Denmark and Belgium between 1999 and 2004. The figure for Switzerland witnessed a steady growth of 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in UK between 1999 and 2004. The figure for Switzerland and Belgium underwent a moderate climb of under 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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. On the other hand
, the data for Sweden and Denmark decreased slightly
 by roughly 1%. 

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