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With the increase in low cost Airlines .Overseas travel has never been easier or more affordable. However, some people believe that such travel should be Limited or stopped altogether to preserve the planet. How far do you agree? Should government put measures in the place to control amount of air travel.

With the increase in low cost Airlines. Overseas travel has never been easier or more affordable. However, some people believe that such travel should be Limited or stopped altogether to preserve the planet. How far do you agree? Should government put measures in the place to control amount of air travel. Wn0x0
Flying in airplane fulfills people desire to see the nature. In this present scenario, the inclined in cost- effective Airlines. But, Overseas travel has never been affordable. Whereas, some people thought that such travel should be banned to preserve the environment from pollution. However, other think that government should take steps to control the air travel. I agree with second view and I will discuss my view points in upcoming paragraph. To begin with, the first and foremost reason is that if government stop the air travel. They face many problems like exported things. Secondly, economy will also not flourish because with the help of air travel government take taxes from ticket. Finally, airlines are very cost- effective for people to reach the destination in less hours as compared to other mode of transportation. What is more, such travels like aeroplane has never been banned because if government banned Airlines people face problems like they cannot travel to foreign countries such as England, Canada. Probing ahead, authorities should take steps to control pollution. Firstly, people do not use air travel for domestic purpose. They should spend money on other modes buses and trains. So, people use these transportation for domestic purpose. Moreover, people use eco-friendly fuel to save the environment. To instance, individual use eco- friendly fuel in cars and buses so they never suffer from pollution problems with the help of this individual breath in fresh pollution free air. To sum up, I would like to reiterate that Airlines never been stopped because peoples face problems to go to International countries. So, government take step to preserve nature for individual. They should follow government norms to control pollution from Airlines.
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the nature. In this present scenario, the inclined in cost- effective Airlines.
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, Overseas
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has never been affordable.
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to preserve the environment from
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. They face
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take taxes from ticket.
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, airlines are
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banned Airlines
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to foreign countries such as England, Canada. Probing ahead, authorities should take steps to control
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pollution
.
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air
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free
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. To sum up, I would like to reiterate that Airlines never been
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take step to preserve nature for individual. They should follow
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norms to control
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pollution
from Airlines.
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IELTS academic With the increase in low cost Airlines. Overseas travel has never been easier or more affordable. However, some people believe that such travel should be Limited or stopped altogether to preserve the planet. How far do you agree? Should government put measures in the place to control amount of air travel.

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