Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The tables compare the amounts of money gained from selling coffee and bananas in two years, 1999 and 2004 in five countries in Europe.

The tables compare the amounts of money gained from selling coffee and bananas in two years, 1999 and 2004 in five countries in Europe. D2xnW
The tables compare the amount of money gained from selling Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 2 years 1999 and 2004 in fives European nations namely UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. It is clear that, the money earned from coffee in five countries all witnessed a substantial increase and UK was a nation that earned money from purchasing coffee more than others in the table. Moreover, two out of five countries in the table were Sweden and Denmark observed a significant decrease in the amount of money from selling bananas in 2004. And selling bananas helped Switzerland gained more money than other nations. In 1999, the amount of money five countries earned from selling coffee was fairly low with the highest number was 3 millions. The money Switzerland and Belgium earned from coffee are double in 2004 as much as that in 1999 ( from 3 millions to 6 millions and from 1 to 1. 7 millions, respectively). While that of Denmark and Sweden simply saw a slight increase, which rose by 0. 2 millions in both countries( from 1. 8 to 2 millions and 0. 8 to 1 million, respectively). After five years, UK became a biggest earner from selling coffee, which reached 20 millions of euro in 2004. The money earned from selling bananas experienced noticeable growth in Switzerland, which stood at 15 millions and then rose remarkably to 47 millions in 2004. That of UK and Belgium followed the same pattern ( from 1 to 5. 5 million and from 0. 6 to 4 millions, respectively). In 2004 was seen a downward trend by 0. 8 millions in the money gained from purchasing bananas in Sweden and similarly, Denmark became the lowest earner from selling bananas, which hit the bottom at 0. 9 millions in 2004.
The tables compare the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
gained from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
Possible spelling mistake found.
Fairtrade-labelled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
and bananas in 2 years 1999 and 2004 in fives European nations
namely
UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.

It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earned
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
in five
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
all witnessed a substantial increase and UK was a nation that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
from purchasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
more than others in the table.
Moreover
, two out of five
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
in the table were Sweden and Denmark observed a significant decrease in the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
bananas in 2004. And
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
bananas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
Switzerland gained more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
than other nations.

In 1999, the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
five
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earned
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
was
fairly
low with the highest number was 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
Switzerland and Belgium
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earned
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
are double in 2004 as much as that in 1999
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
from 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
to 6
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
and from 1 to 1. 7
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
,
respectively
). While that of Denmark and Sweden
simply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a slight increase, which rose by 0. 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
in both countries
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
from 1. 8 to 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
and 0. 8 to 1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
,
respectively
). After five years, UK became
Use "the" with the superlative.
a
biggest earner from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
, which reached 20
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
of euro in 2004.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earned
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
bananas experienced noticeable growth in Switzerland, which stood at 15
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
and then rose
remarkably
to 47
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
in 2004. That of UK and Belgium followed the same pattern
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
from 1 to 5. 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
million
and from 0. 6 to 4
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
,
respectively
). In 2004 was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
a downward trend by 0. 8
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
money
gained from purchasing bananas in Sweden and
similarly
, Denmark became the lowest earner from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
selling
bananas, which hit the bottom at 0. 9
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
millions
in 2004.

IELTS academic The tables compare the amounts of money gained from selling coffee and bananas in two years, 1999 and 2004 in five countries in Europe.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • The data of compter ownership
    The bar charts illustrated that the proporation of computer ownership among people in 2002-10, and the comparison of computer ownership according to five various education level in 2002 and 2010. Since 2002, the percent of people who harbor CP over 50% all the time. The number of people who have co...
  • information about Turkish, greek and iranian students enrolled
    The line graph illustrates about the enrollment of international students at Sheffield university during the year 2005 and 2009. The data is calibrated in a numbers. overall, the data indicate that number of students admitted in university was higher in iran as compare to greece who, having lowest ...
  • Task 1 The graph shows that the data
    The graph illustrated that the proportion of computer ownership among people in 2002-10, and the comparison of computer ownership according to five various education level in 2002 and 2010. Since 2002, the percent of people who harbor CP over 50% all the time. The number of people who have computer...
  • the graph shows the sells of mobile phones brand
    The bar chart depicts the proportion of phones sold over four years, globally. The units are sorted by brands such as Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG and, ZTE. Overall, ZTE showed the lowest number of sells over the whole of period (from 2009 to 2013) compared to the highest purchase of Nokia throughoout...
  • The table below shows the entertainment preferences of a part of the population of Germany in relation to their age in millions.
    The provided table represent information about entertainment activites in Germany for a part of people and for different age stages. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of people who prefer to watch televation porgram more than the number of theatre and visit the opera. According to give...
  • The graph below shows the percentage of obese men and women in four different countries, according to a report relevant
    The following graph shows the percentage of overweight men and women in four other countries according to a report in 2013 Overall the males are more obese than females. Iceland is more affected from obesity The Men of Iceland and Malta are over the 70 percentage and women of USA and Iceland are ov...





Get more results for topic:
  • The tables compare the amounts of money gained from selling coffee and bananas in two years, 1999 and 2004 in five countries in Europe.