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The tables compare changes in number of schools

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The tables compare changes in number of schools, teachers and students between primary and secondary schools in UK over three various years. Overall, there was many more British primary schools over the period. On the other hand, although there was an upward trend, over the years, for most of the data, numers of primary schools and their buildings were the only decreased ones. With regard to primary schools, count of schools started by around 35 thousands in 1900. However the figuer went down by around a third after a decade. RegardeIing the only upward data in these schools, there was a change of them by about 75 thousand over the period. Finally, less and less students involved in these schools, as figures declined by about one-sixth from 1900 to 2000. As far as secondary schools are considered, there spread were not as much as the formers, yet they multiplied much higher by approximately seven times. Furthermore, simmilar multiplication happend for the other two categories, as they doubled for teachers and increased by less than forty times for students. However, the last two mentioned ones were not that far comparing with the same catigories in primary schools.
The tables compare
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in number of
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, teachers and students between
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primary
and secondary
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schools
in UK
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over
three various years.

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, there was
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more British
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primary
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schools
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over
the period.
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the years, for most of the data,
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of
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primary
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and their buildings were the
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only
decreased ones.

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schools
, count of
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by around 35 thousands in 1900.
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However
the
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went down by around a third after a decade.
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upward data in these
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schools
, there was a
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change
of them by about 75 thousand
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Finally
, less and
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less
students involved in these
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schools
, as figures declined by about one-sixth from 1900 to 2000.

As far as secondary
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are considered
, there spread were not as much as the
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formers
,
yet
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,
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multiplication
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for the other two categories, as they doubled for teachers and increased by less than forty times for students.
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