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The maps below show the changes in the layout of the woodwards university from 1985 to till now.

The maps below show the changes in the layout of the woodwards university from 1985 to till now. mXA2q
The maps reveal the alteration of layout of the woodward university from the 1985 to present. It is vivid from the chart the one of the gigantic car park demolished in year 1985 and new shuttle bus terminal is construct in these days, but this area decreased. A new footpath is bulid along the shuttle bus terminal. The Admin block is diminished and looks like rectangle shape. Define the this the biology block physical block, Chemistry block was totally redeveloped and converted into S cience laboratories in these days. over the time period the library expanded and new it centre is a new IT center is generate within the library. The car park was completely removed and a lecture theatre is located in the eastside of university which is oval in shape. Overall, the different block of science laboratories was entirely redevelopment and change into science lab. The world is modernised in this upcoming days and build twice footpath
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woodward
university from the 1985 to present. It is vivid from the chart the one of the gigantic car park demolished in year 1985 and
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new
shuttle bus terminal is construct in these days,
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but
this area decreased. A
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new
footpath is
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bulid
along the shuttle bus terminal. The Admin
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block
is diminished
and looks like rectangle shape. Define
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the this
the biology
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block
physical
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block
, Chemistry
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block
was
totally
redeveloped and converted into
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S cience
laboratories in these days.
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over
the time period the library expanded and
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new
it
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centre
is a
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IT center is generate within the library. The car park was completely removed and a lecture
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theatre
is located
in
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the eastside of
university which is
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oval in shape
.
Overall
, the
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different
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of science laboratories was
entirely
redevelopment and
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change
into science lab. The world is
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modernised
in this upcoming days and build twice
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footpath
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