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the process shows how to produce pineapples

the process shows how to produce pineapples E7Q33
The diagram illustrates how pineapples are grown, harvested, and mass-produced for different purposes through a series of streamlined steps involving the help of both humans and machinery. From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that a pineapple tree needs around one year to reach maturity and is ready to be harvested. It is also clear that the harvested pineapples are used for different purposes based on their sizes. Taking a closer look at the diagram, we can see that pineapple trees are grown in regions with an average temperature of between 28-30oC. The ideal distance between two straight furrows of pineapples is 26 cm. When the trees are seven months old, chemicals are sprayed to protect them from harmful insects, followed by a five-month period before they are full-grown and ripe. A typical ripe pineapple is around 30 cm long and weighs about 2 kg. On their arrival at the factory, the pineapples are washed in a giant water tank to remove chemical residues, dirt, bugs, and impurities. After that, the cleaned pineapples are categorized/classified into three different groups according to their sizes and grades. The pineapples in the smallest group then have their crowns chopped off and their skins peeled before being juiced in an extractor, producing pineapple juice. The middle-sized pineapples also have their crowns and skins removed before being cut into bite-sized portions, which are later put in cans. The last group of pineapples is covered in wax to preserve them for longer, packaged in baskets, and shipped to different countries by freight ship
The diagram illustrates how pineapples
are grown
, harvested, and

mass-produced for
different
purposes through a series of streamlined

steps
involving the
help
of both humans and machinery.

From an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that a pineapple

tree needs around one year to reach maturity and is ready to be

harvested
. It is
also
clear
that the harvested pineapples are
used
for


different
purposes based on their sizes.

Taking a closer look at the diagram, we can
see
that pineapple trees

are
grown in regions with an average temperature of between 28-30oC.

The ideal distance between two straight furrows of pineapples is 26

cm. When the trees are seven months
old
, chemicals
are sprayed
to


protect them from harmful insects, followed by a five-month period

before
they are full-grown and ripe. A typical ripe pineapple is
around


30 cm long and weighs about 2 kg.

On their arrival at the factory, the pineapples
are washed
in a giant

water
tank to remove chemical residues, dirt, bugs, and impurities.

After that, the cleaned pineapples
are categorized
/classified into three

different
groups according to their sizes and grades. The
pineapples


in the smallest group then have their crowns chopped off and their

skins peeled
before
being juiced
in an extractor, producing pineapple

juice
.

The middle-sized pineapples
also
have their crowns and skins

removed
before
being
cut
into bite-sized portions, which are later put

in
cans.

The last group of pineapples
is covered
in wax to preserve them for

longer, packaged in baskets, and shipped to
different
countries by

freight ship
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