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The tables below show predicted and actual immigration figures for the UK for the years 1984 - 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information

The tables below show predicted and actual immigration figures for the UK for the years 1984 - 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information rLnjm

The tables compare the forecast and substantive immigration figures for the UK for 17 year period from 1984 to 2000. Overall, the data indicate that the prediction for the number of immigrants in table 1 increase more stable than the actual table. As a result, it can be easily noticed that there is an inconsistency between predicted and actual immigration figures. It is noticeable that the actual immigration figures fluctuated more than the predicted ones. The predicted data tended to go up slightly, on the contrary, the real starting point is higher but suddenly hit the lowest point at 43000 since 1984 until 1987. Then in 1989 both of them reached 80000 and they varied moderately for the next 8 years. 3 years later, reality rise reached a peak at 163000, more than predicted 15000. In addition, 2 figures have not the same number for each year except 1989. The two years periods of underestimation is alternated by ones of overestimation. For example, in the first two years, the actual number is higher than the predicted one, and after two years, it is reverse.

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actual
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predicted
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 immigration figures.

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actual
 immigration figures fluctuated more than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeseeenvisionconcludeanticipateforecastcall
predicted
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3 years later, reality rise reached a peak at 163000, more than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeseeenvisionconcludeanticipateforecastcall
predicted
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, 2 figures have not the same number for each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 except 1989. The two years periods of underestimation is alternated
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 of overestimation. For example
, in the first
 two years, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcertainsubstantialdefinitephysicalsubstantive
actual
 number is higher than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeseeenvisionconcludeanticipateforecastcall
predicted
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