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The graphs below show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US.

The graphs below show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US. JlbEk
The pie charts illustrate the different kinds of expenses in two nations, namely the US and the UK. In general, the money spent on DVDs was the lowest point in both countries while rent and food took the highest proportion in each region. for details, rent was the most prevalent kind of expenditure in the US and accounted for 30 percent, being 10 percent higher compared to the UK. By contrast, the budget used for DVDs in both nations were responsible for merely 10 percent. In terms of food, people in the UK spent more money than the US one, at 25 percent and 18 percent respectively. In addition, the expense of food in the US was slightly lower at three percent than the Uk. Interestingly, the budget used for going out and transport in both nations were equal 15 percent.
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In general
, the money spent on DVDs was the lowest point in both countries while rent and food took the highest proportion in each region.

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, rent was the most prevalent kind of expenditure in the US and accounted for 30
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, being 10
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higher compared to the UK. By contrast, the budget
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for DVDs in both nations were responsible for
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in the UK spent more money than the US one, at 25
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and 18
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for going out and transport in both nations were equal 15
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