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The pie chart illustrates different destinations of Anthropology students after graduating, while the table shows the salaries they got after five-working years. Overall, the largest percentage of destinations was seen in full-time work, whereas most graduates got paid over $100, 000 after 5 years. Looking at the first chart in more detail, the percentage of full-time work was over a half, which was also the highest. While, there was a similar figure in the data of full-time postgraduate study and others with 8%. Besides, the figure for part-time work and unemployment were nearly the same with around 12%. The least percentage of graduates was seen in part-time work and postgraduate study. Turning to the table, the income of freelance consultants and the government sector were the same in the salary group of $25, 000-$49, 999 and $50, 000-$74, 999. Next, 40% of freelance graduates earned $75, 000-$99, 999, while a lower percentage was shown in the government sector with 30%. Meanwhile, graduates working in the government had a higher percentage with 50% in the group of $100. 000 plus. In two first salary levels, people from private companies had higher data, meanwhile there was a reverse in the next levels.
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destinations of Anthropology students after graduating, while the table
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the salaries they
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after five-working years.
Overall
, the largest
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percentage
of destinations was
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in full-time
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work
, whereas most
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graduates
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paid over $100, 000 after 5 years.

Looking at the
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chart in more detail, the
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of full-time
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work
was over a half, which was
also
the highest. While, there was a similar figure in the data of full-time postgraduate study
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and others
with 8%.
Besides
, the figure for part-time
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work
and unemployment were
nearly
the same with around 12%. The least
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and postgraduate study.

Turning to the table, the income of freelance consultants and the
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government
sector were the same in the salary group of $25, 000-$49, 999 and $50, 000-$74, 999.
Next
, 40% of freelance
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graduates
earned $75, 000-$99, 999, while a lower
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percentage
was shown
in the
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government
sector with 30%. Meanwhile,
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graduates
working in the
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had a higher
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with 50% in the group of $100. 000 plus. In two
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from private
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had higher data, meanwhile there was a reverse in the
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IELTS academic anthropology graduates 5 years

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6.5
Overall Band Score
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