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The table represents provided information regarding the number of sold, the proportion of 10 types of genre published in UK in the year 2012.

The table represents provided information regarding the number of sold, the proportion of 10 types of genre published in UK in the year 2012. MmdAQ
The table represents provided information regarding the number of sold, the proportion of 10 types of genre published in UK in the year 2012. Overall, it can be seen that, the number of released and the percentage of drama and documentary was the lagerst segment and remain the same. In comparison, the number of comedy was the highest point in proportion of income from ticket sales. Interestingly, ie should be noted that, 35 of drama and documentary were the same in the number of releases, while the smallest data was biopic, it got 1. Then, the total number of released was 148. On the other hand, 23. 6% of drama and documentary are more than comedy, horror, biopic, crime, action, and thriller, at 6%, 14. 1%, 22. 9%, 18. 9%, 20. 9%, and 14. 8% respectively. However, 0. 7%of biopic was the slower point. Furthermore, in the percentage of income from ticket sales, comedy was 45. 4%, it was the largest data. However, 1. 3% of thriller was the lowest figure. Finally, the total proportion of incomes from ticket sales of different genre was 100%.
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of released was 148.
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