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The tables below give the information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

The tables below give the information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050. M9Eq
The given tabular charts illustrate the information about the world population and distribution categorized by six different countries: Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, North Amercia and Oceania during the year 1950 to 2050 in the regions. The data is celebrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently representation. It can be seen that, the worlds total population in 1950 were 2. 5 billions which was categorised in six countries as: 9% in Africa, 56% in Asia, 22% in Europe, and afterthat, it was decreased as in Latin America the populater were 6%, in North America it was 7% and at last, the least population were is in Oceania which was less than 1%. On other hand, the world population in 2000 were 6. 5 billion in which 13% were in Africa, 60% were in Asia and 12% were in Europe. Moreover, in Latin America population was 9%, in North America population was 5% and in Oceania the population were only 1%. Furthermore, in 2050, the total population will be 9. 0 billion as estimate. Apart from that, the population in Africa will be 20%, 50% in Asia and 7% in Europe. At the last, in Latin America, North America and in Oceania, the population will be 9%, 4% and 1% respectively. Overall it is evident that, Asia is the most populated country and on the other hand, Oceania is the very least populated country from all the countries.
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: Africa, Asia,

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and Oceania during the year 1950 to 2050 in the regions. The data
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in 1950 were 2. 5 billions which was
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were is in Oceania which was less than 1%.

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in 2000 were 6. 5 billion in which 13% were in Africa, 60% were in Asia and 12% were in Europe.
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in Africa will be 20%, 50% in Asia and 7% in Europe. At the last, in
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IELTS academic The tables below give the information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

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