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The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. VNRA
The table illustrates information about the population of the world in six region(Africa, asia, Europe, latin america, north america and oceania)in the year 1950 and 2000, with prediction of the condition in 2050. It table was measured in percentage. Overall, Asia was the most significant part of the people while Oceania made the lowest contribution in the population. Although, at the beginning, Africa experienced downward trend at that period, it showed an upward trend at the end of period. First of all, World population in 1950 was accounted for 2. 5 billions and it has rose rapidly in 2000 around 6. 0 billions. However, it will be estimate approximately 9. 0 billions in the year 2050. The distribution rate of africa was about one in ten in 1950 and it has grown around 4% in the year 2000. Also, it will guess that there will be about a fifth of population. In case of asia the population has more than a half of population in 1950 and it has slightly increased in 2000 about 60% of population. Despite it has more population in 2000, it will slowly decline in the year 2050 around 59%. Secondly, In term of europe there was 22% of po.
The table illustrates information about the
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of the world in six region(Africa,
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asia
, Europe,
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latin
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america
,
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north america
and
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oceania
)in the
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year
1950 and 2000, with prediction of the condition in 2050. It
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was measured
in percentage.

Overall
, Asia was the most significant part of the
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people
while Oceania made the lowest contribution in the
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population
. Although, at the beginning, Africa experienced downward trend at that period, it
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showed
an upward trend at the
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end
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First of all
, World
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population
in 1950
was accounted
for 2. 5 billions and it has
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rose
rapidly
in 2000 around 6. 0 billions.
However
, it will be
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estimate
approximately 9. 0 billions in the
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year
2050. The distribution rate of
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africa
was about one in ten in 1950 and it has grown around 4% in the
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year
2000.
Also
, it will guess that there will be about a fifth of
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population
. In case of
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asia
the
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population
has more than a half of
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population
in 1950 and it has
slightly
increased in 2000 about 60% of
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population
. Despite it has more
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population
in 2000, it will
slowly
decline in the
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year
2050 around 59%.

Secondly
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europe
there was 22% of
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IELTS academic The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

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