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The line graph illustrates information about man and women who rates of smoking in someland of university. Overall, it can be seen clearly seen from the graph the number of people who smoke decreased throughout the period. Where the number of women who smoke gradually raised from 1960 to 1975. To begin with, in the year 1960 the number of boys who smoke was accounted for 600 then after it go down continusly over the period and reached approximately 350 in the year 2000. In contrast to men the number of women who smoke was 100 in 1960 and it start to increased and reached 300 in the year 1975. Furthermore, it reamain constant in the year 1975 to 1980 then after it decline throughout the period. In the year 2000 it reached 200. on the other hand, the chart shows that the number of women, who smoke in someland university in the year 1980 to 1985 it reached 300. Moreover, in the year 2000 women who smoke slowly decreased around 200 per people. Lastly in the final year 2000 the number of man and women who smoke reached around 210 per person.
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decreased throughout the period.
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raised from 1960 to 1975.

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1960 the
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was accounted
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approximately 350 in the
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2000.
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was 100 in 1960 and it
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300 in the
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1975.
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constant in the
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1975 to 1980 then after it decline throughout the period. In the
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2000 it
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in
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university in the
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1980 to 1985 it
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300.
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2000
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slowly
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IELTS academic Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

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4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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