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The tables below give information about the world population

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The two tables illustrate the information about the world population and distribution from 1950 to 2000. The table also predicts the population and situation in 2050. With regards to the Oceania, the population remains steady about 1% throughout given time period. In Africa and Asia, the distribution of population in 1950 were 9% and 56% respectively and it marginally grew in 2000 about 13% and 60%. It will also increase in 2050 about 20% and 59% in Africa and Asia. The distribution of population in Europ in 1950 were about 22% and it decresed dramatically in 2000 about 12%. In 2050 table predicts that it only 7% in Europ. On other hand, in latin America the distribution of population were about 6% in 1950 and it grew marginally about 9%in year 2000 and it will remain steady in 2050. Moreover different pattern emarged in North America. The distribution of population of it decreased throughout time period about 7% to 5% from 1950 to 2000. Overall, the world population increases ten times from 1950 to 2050. In Africa, Asia and Latin america the distribution of population increases while in Europ and North America the distribution of population decreased through out time period.
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