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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The diagrams depict the amount of coffee and bananas bought by five countries in 1999 and 2004. what stands out from the table is that the UK and Switzerland are the countries that have the most consume fair-trade coffee and bananas respectively. As regards coffee, in 1999, Switzerland has purchased the most (3m£), While in 2004, the UK buying €20 million of fair-trade coffee came into the first place. All countries experienced an upward trend in purchasing coffee. Switzerland double the amounts, the UK went from 1. 5 to 20 is the most changed. Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden change were 1. 5 to 2, 1 to 1. 7, and 0. 8 to 1 in turn. looking at bananas, Switzerland UK and Belgium where consume more than before in 2004 in comparison with 1999, While Sweden and Denmark experience a downward trend From 1. 8 to 1 and 2 to 0. 9 respectively.
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. Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden
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IELTS academic The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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