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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams illustrate how cement is produced in the factory line, and how to produce concrete by combining cement and several ingredients in the building objectives. Overall, there are five stages in its cement manufacture, starting with the raw materials and ending with packing it in the bags. While the process of producing the concrete, which is consisted of four ingredients to build infrastructure. To begin with cement production, limestone and clay are mashed by a special crusher turning into a tiny powder. And then, this powder is mixed in the mixer tube and is sent to the rotating heater process, where the mixed powder is cycled and heated. The resulting powder must be ground to be cement and packed this cement into the big bag package. In the next production to make concrete for building, there are gravel(small stones), sand, cement, and water which is in 50 percent, 25 percent, 15 percent, and 10 percent respectively. They are mixed into the concrete mixer, which is the large bowl. After the ingredients are mixed together with the perfect combination, the cement is ready to be used in infrastructure.
The diagrams illustrate how
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cement
is produced
in the factory line, and how to produce concrete by combining
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cement
and several ingredients in the building objectives.

Overall
, there are five stages in its
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cement
manufacture, starting with the raw materials and ending with packing it in the bags. While the process of producing the concrete, which
is consisted
of four ingredients to build infrastructure.

To
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begin
with
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cement
production, limestone and clay
are mashed
by a special crusher turning into a tiny
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powder
. And then, this
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powder
is
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mixed
in the mixer tube and is
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sent
to the rotating heater process, where the
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mixed
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powder
is cycled
and heated. The resulting
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powder
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must
be ground
to be
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cement
and packed this
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cement
into the
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big
bag package.

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next
production to
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make
concrete for building, there are gravel(
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small
stones), sand,
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cement
, and water which is in 50
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percent
, 25
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percent
, 15
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percent
, and 10
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percent
respectively
. They are
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mixed
into the concrete mixer, which is the large bowl. After the ingredients are
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mixed
together with the perfect combination, the
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cement
is ready to be
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used
in infrastructure.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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