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The graph below show the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The line chart depicts the information about the three kinds of spreads such as low fat and reduced spreads, margarine and butter which were consumed over the 26years from 1981 to 2007. The units is calibrated in grams. Taking a general overview, the consumption of margarine and butter decreased over the period given while for low fat and reduced spreads, it rose. At the end all three types of spreads were declined in the same pattern. It can be clearly seen that the amount of butter used, it began at around 140grams and then peaked out 160 grams in 1986 before falling dramatically to about 50 grams in the last year. Likewise, approximately 90 grams of margarine was eaten in the first year after, which this figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40grams in 2007. On the other hand, the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads only started in 1996 at about 10grams. This figure which reached a high of just over 80 grams 5years later, fell slightly in the final years to near about 40grams in 2007
The line chart depicts the information about the three kinds of
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spreads
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low
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fat
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reduced
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spreads
, margarine and butter which
were consumed
over the 26years from 1981 to 2007. The units
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is
calibrated in grams.

Taking a general overview, the consumption of margarine and butter decreased over the period
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given
while for
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
, it rose. At the
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end
all three types of
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spreads
were declined
in the same pattern. It can be
clearly
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seen
that the amount of butter
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used
, it began at around
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140grams
and then peaked out 160
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grams
in 1986
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before
falling
dramatically
to about 50
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grams
in the last
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year
.
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, approximately 90
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grams
of margarine
was eaten
in the
first
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year
after, which this figure fluctuated
slightly
and dropped to a
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low
of
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40grams
in 2007.
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, the consumption of
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
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only
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started
in 1996 at about
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10grams
. This figure which reached a high of
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just
over 80
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grams
5years later, fell
slightly
in the final years to near about
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40grams
in 2007
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