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The above line chart represents the number of tourists visiting Thailand and Bali from 1995 to 2003.

The above bar chart describes the number of tourists visiting Thailand and Bali from 2000 to 2008. Although number of tourists visiting Thailand was about 50 tourists in 2000, which is the lowest number of tourists visiting Thailand, it rose to 400 tourists in 2008, which is the highest number of tourists visiting Thailand. In addition, Bali received(welcomed) 100 tourists in 2000, which is the lowest number of tourists visiting Bali, but it welcomed more than 300 tourists in 2006, which is the highest number of tourists visiting Bali. Finally, the number of tourists visiting Thailand and Bali standing at 200 tourists in 2003.
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IELTS academic The above line chart represents the number of tourists visiting Thailand and Bali from 1995 to 2003.

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