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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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The two tables contain sales of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in five different European countries in the years 1999 and 2004. It is clear that the first table of Fairtrade coffee in 1999 ranged from 0. 8 to 3 million euros in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden, while banana sales also similar between 0. 6 and 2 million euros, with Switzerland the highest amount of banana sales. In 2004, sale figures of both products had riseb significantly, expect Denmark and Sweden which recorded drops in bananas sales. The first table of coffee sales increased in all five countries. In two places sales increased by the same small amount 1. 8-2 million euros. Moreover, theres was a slightly larger increasment in Belgium, which was 1-1. 7 million euros. However, the sales of coffee in Switzerland has doubled in amount, at 3-6 million euros. Finally, in the UK there was an enormous increase, 1. 5-20 million euros. In terms of banana sales, Switzerland sales figure jumped 15-47 million euros. However, Uk and Belgium had fairly increase in sales of bananas 1-5. 5 and 0. 6-4 million euros. On top of that, there was considerably decreased in Sweden and Denmark, which was 1. 8-1 and 2-0. 9 million euros respectively.
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in 1999 ranged from 0. 8 to 3
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increased in all five countries. In two places
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, Switzerland
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