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the proportion of the participating of woman in senior management positions in three various companies (Elden Ltd,Bamforth Ltd,Finsbury Ltd) between 1980 and 2015.

the proportion of the participating of woman in senior management positions in three various companies (Elden Ltd, Bamforth Ltd, Finsbury Ltd) between 1980 and 2015. GJkD2
The given table chart illustrates the information about the proportion of the participating of woman in senior management positions in three various companies (Elden Ltd, Bamforth Ltd, Finsbury Ltd) between 1980 and 2015. The general overview here is that the number of senior management who were a woman increased in all three companies. the highest amount of participation woman was in the Finsbury Ltd in 1980, While the Elden Ltd was the majority of woman senior management number in 2015. Between1980 and 2000, the number of woman senior management in Bamforth Ltd and Finsbury Ltd went up steadily to17% and 20 % respectively. Similarly, the Elden Ltd’s woman senior management amount rose dramatically by 30% over the period. By 2015, it can be seen that, the woman senior management figure of Elden Ltd and the Bamforth Ltd went up significantly. The Finsbury Ltd, on the other hand, indicated the relatively tiny changes of percentage of its woman senior management by 6%. The percentage of all three countries reached to 64% in Elden Ltd, 43% in Bamforth Ltd and only 26% in Finsbury Ltd.
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number in 2015.

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IELTS academic the proportion of the participating of woman in senior management positions in three various companies (Elden Ltd, Bamforth Ltd, Finsbury Ltd) between 1980 and 2015.

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