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The given table and graph illustrate information about comments of visitors come to shopping mall in Auckland, New Zealand. Overall, male respondents were more in positive opinion about restaurants, shops satisfied twice more females compared to men. The number of satisfaction about shops was 62 in men and 17 of them were blissful. However, 34 females very satisfied about it. There was a similarity about the number of dissatisfactions, shops did not satisfy 20 of both genders. 18 males did not have any opinions about shops and it was twice as many as females. Differ from women, restaurants were satisfied 55 men according to the survey, 32 of all women were in that opinion about restaurant. As a consequence, the number of dissatisfactions about restaurants were high in females about 21 and it was 4 times more than males. Both genders were almost the same in very satisfying and not giving comments about restaurants. The design showed that 62% of all candidates satisfied about shopping complex. On the other hand, the complex did not live up to 10% of all people and it was the percentage with who did not give any comments. 17% of both genders very satisfied about shops and restaurants.
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table and graph illustrate information about comments of visitors
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come
to shopping mall in Auckland, New Zealand.
Overall
, male respondents were more in
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positive
opinion about
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restaurants
,
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shops
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satisfied
twice more females compared to
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men
.

The number of satisfaction about
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shops
was 62 in
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men
and 17 of them were blissful.
However
, 34 females
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very
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satisfied
about it. There was a similarity about the number of
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dissatisfactions
,
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shops
did not satisfy 20 of both genders. 18 males did not have any opinions about
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shops
and it was twice as
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many
as females.

Differ from women,
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restaurants
were
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satisfied
55
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men
according to the survey, 32 of all women were in that opinion about
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restaurant
. As a consequence, the number of
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dissatisfactions
about
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restaurants
were high in females about 21 and it was 4 times more than males. Both genders were almost the same in
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very
satisfying and not giving comments about restaurants.

The design
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showed
that 62% of all candidates
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satisfied
about shopping complex.
On the other hand
, the complex did not
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live
up to 10% of all
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people
and it was the percentage with who did not give any comments. 17% of both genders
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very
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satisfied
about
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shops
and
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restaurants
.
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