Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The provided bar chart elucidates the comparison of the top services of Someland in 2005 and 2015, and its the prediction in 2025.

The provided bar chart elucidates the comparison of the top services of Someland in 2005 and 2015, and its the prediction in 2025. N3Pd0
The provided bar chart elucidates the comparison of the top services of Someland in 2005 and 2015, and its the prediction in 2025. As a general trend, the sales of dairy products and international tourism were the highest; in contrast, there was a decline in meat products. As far as the sales of the dairy products and the international tourism are concerned, the hospitality was 6. 1 billion and groceries goods was sold by 5 billion in 2005, whilst in 2015, the travel income was 7 billion and there was 7. 9 billion in the dairy based manufactures, which was the highest. Moreover, it is worth noting that the tourism services soared up by 0. 9 billion than of 2005. The most striking difference is that the earning of daily yielding leaped up by 2. 9 billion substantially. Interestingly, it should be noted that the everyday product’s forecast revenue was 7. 5 billion. In other words, it would be went down in 2025 that is observed in this data. As regards with a meat products, in 2005, its sales was 4 billion, as opposed to 3. 5 billion in 2015. Additionally, it collapsed by 0. 5 billion in 2015. Furthermore, the revenue in 2025 was predicted by 3 billion. Finally, it is noticed that it has been reducing marginally.
The provided bar chart elucidates the comparison of the top services of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Someland
in 2005 and 2015, and
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
its
the prediction in 2025.

As a general trend, the sales of dairy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and international tourism were the highest;
in contrast
, there was a decline in meat products.

As far as the sales of the dairy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and the international tourism
are concerned
, the hospitality was 6. 1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
and groceries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
was sold
by 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
in 2005, whilst in 2015, the travel income was 7
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
and there was 7. 9
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
in the dairy based manufactures, which was the highest.
Moreover
, it is worth noting that the tourism services soared up by 0. 9
Use "(billion)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
billion
than of 2005. The most striking difference is that the earning of daily yielding leaped up by 2. 9
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
substantially
.
Interestingly
, it should
be noted
that the everyday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product’s
forecast revenue was 7. 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
.
In other words
, it would be
Consider using a past participle here: "gone".
went
down in 2025 that
is observed
in this data.

As regards with a meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
, in 2005, its sales was 4
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
, as opposed to 3. 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
in 2015.
Additionally
, it collapsed by 0. 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
in 2015.
Furthermore
, the revenue in 2025
was predicted
by 3
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
.
Finally
, it
is noticed
that it has been reducing
marginally
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The provided bar chart elucidates the comparison of the top services of Someland in 2005 and 2015, and its the prediction in 2025.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The provided bar chart elucidates the comparison of the top services of Someland in 2005 and 2015, and its the prediction in 2025.