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The diagrams below illustrate early toos from 1.4 million years ago and 800,000 years ago. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below illustrate early toos from 1. 4 million years ago and 800, 000 years ago. VX9m
The diagaram delineates the differences between prehistoric tools from 1. 4 and 0. 8 million years ago. From overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the earlier tool has less subtle edges while the newer tool is more refined. Comparing the two tools based on the frontal view, the 800, 000 years tool is sharper with more rounded sides. The older one seems slightly slender and rough-cut, displaying primitiveness From the side view, the 1. 4 million years ago is thicker and craggy than the smoother 800, 000 years ago one. Lastly, there is a major differences viewed from the back side. The newer tool almost imitate the frontal view and wider on the bottom. On the other hand, the older one has heavily craced side and uneven shape.
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delineates the differences between prehistoric
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tools
from 1. 4 and 0. 8 million years ago. From
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the earlier
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tool
has less subtle edges while the newer
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tool
is more refined.

Comparing the two
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tools
based on the frontal view, the 800, 000 years
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tool
is sharper with more rounded
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sides
. The older one seems
slightly
slender and rough-
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cut
, displaying primitiveness

From the side view, the 1. 4 million years ago is thicker and craggy than the smoother 800, 000 years ago one.
Lastly
, there is a major differences viewed from the back side. The newer
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tool
almost imitate the frontal view and wider on the bottom.
On the other hand
, the older one has
heavily
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craced
side and uneven shape.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below illustrate early toos from 1. 4 million years ago and 800, 000 years ago.

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