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The table suumarizes some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of februray 2000

The table suumarizes some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of februray 2000 KwEyL
The tabular chart depicts the sales figuresof various types of publications by college bookshop in february 2000. It can be interpreted from the table that college staff purchased 13 more books of fiction than the students. The members of public showed no interest in this genre. The book club members bought 76 books. Under the non-fiction section, the college students pur hased more books out of all non- nook club members, that is, 194. These books were very popular with book club members as they purchazed 942 books which was nearly thrice the count of books elected by Non Book Club members. The data further suggests that the college students were most interested in magazines and took 124o of these, followed by staff members who purchased 333 magazines. These were of least importance to book club members who took only 33 copies. Out of total, magazines were sold in ahuge number. The book club members were more into reading, folloeed by college students. Hence, magazines were moore popular amid college students and fictionbooks did not find any reader among the members of public.
The tabular chart depicts the sales
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figuresof
various types of publications by college bookshop in
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february
2000.

It can
be interpreted
from the table that college staff
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purchased
13 more
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books
of fiction than the
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students
. The
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members
of public
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showed
no interest in this genre. The
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book
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club
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members
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bought
76
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books
. Under the non-fiction section, the college
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students pur
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hased
more
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books
out of all non- nook
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club
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members
,
that is
, 194. These
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books
were
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very
popular with
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book
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club
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members
as they
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purchazed
942
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books
which was
nearly
thrice the count of
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books
elected by Non
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Book
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Club
members.

The data
further
suggests that the college
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students
were most interested in
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magazines
and took 124o of these, followed by staff
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members
who
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purchased
333
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magazines
. These were of
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least
importance to
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book
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club
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members
who took
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only
33 copies. Out of total,
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magazines
were sold
in
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ahuge
number. The
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book
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club
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members
were more into reading,
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folloeed
by college students.

Hence
,
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magazines
were
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moore
popular amid college
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students
and
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fictionbooks
did not find any reader among the
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members
of public.
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IELTS academic The table suumarizes some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of februray 2000

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