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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.

The given table compares the global percentage of the share of seven different mobile phone vendors in 2005 and 2006. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that Nokia was the highest while BenQ Mobile was the lowest share in the market. With regard to Nokia, it was a market leader in both years, and its share increased slightly in 2006 as compared to 2005, it rose from 32. 5 to 35 percent. Then, there was Motorola which was 17. 7%, it improved marginally to 21. 1%. Whilst, Sony Ericson uplifted mildly to 7. 4 from 6. 3 percent. Regarding other companies, it reduced significantly, it was 19. 2% in 2005, and dropped to 16. 2%. With regard to BenQ Mobile, it declined about halve from 4. 9% to 2. 4%. And, there was a minimal difference in LG percentage in 2005 and 2006, which was 6. 7% and 6. 3% respectively.
The
given
table compares the global percentage of the share of seven
different
mobile phone vendors in 2005 and 2006. It
is measured
in percentages.

Overall
, it is
clear
that Nokia was the highest while
BenQ
Mobile was the lowest share in the market.

With regard to Nokia, it was a market leader in both years, and its share increased
slightly
in 2006 as compared to 2005, it rose from 32. 5 to 35 percent. Then, there was Motorola which was 17. 7%, it
improved
marginally
to 21. 1%. Whilst, Sony
Ericson
uplifted
mildly
to 7. 4 from 6. 3 percent.

Regarding other
companies
, it
reduced
significantly
, it was 19. 2% in 2005, and dropped to 16. 2%. With regard to
BenQ
Mobile, it declined about halve from 4. 9% to 2. 4%. And, there was a minimal difference in LG percentage in 2005 and 2006, which was 6. 7% and 6. 3%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006.

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