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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the actual and projected share of the economy of Brazil held by the five key business sectors for the years 2009, 2019 and 2029. Beginning with the real figures, the sectors that saw growth between 2009 and 2019 are Finance, Fossil Fuels and Food Processing with rises of around 5 percent for the two former and around 10% for the latter. However, both Tourism and Manufacturing saw falls of around 5% for that period. Turning next to the projected figures for 2029, only the Finance sector is predicted to see a continued growth in 2029, again by 5%. Of the remaining sectors, tourism stays at 2019 levels with around 21% and both Food Processing and Oil, Coal and Gas return to 2009 levels (11 and 26% respectively). Meanwhile, Manufacturing sees a further drop in its share, falling by a further 10 percent to around 5 percent. Overall, for the period covered, the Finance sector stands out in terms of having the largest share of brazil’s economy and its share shows continued growth. The big loser is manufacturing, which starts as the joint smallest sector and sees both real and projected falls.
The bar chart
shows
the actual and projected
share
of the economy of Brazil held by the five key business
sectors
for the years 2009, 2019 and 2029.

Beginning with the real figures, the
sectors
that
saw
growth between 2009 and 2019 are Finance, Fossil Fuels and Food Processing with rises of
around
5 percent for the two former and
around
10% for the latter.
However
, both Tourism and Manufacturing
saw
falls of
around
5% for that period.

Turning
next
to the projected figures for 2029,
only
the Finance
sector
is predicted
to
see
a continued growth in 2029, again by 5%. Of the remaining
sectors
, tourism stays at 2019 levels with
around
21% and both Food Processing and Oil, Coal and Gas return to 2009 levels (11 and 26%
respectively
). Meanwhile, Manufacturing
sees
a
further
drop in its
share
, falling by a
further
10 percent to
around
5 percent.

Overall
, for the period covered, the Finance
sector
stands out in terms of having the largest
share
of
brazil
’s economy and its
share
shows
continued growth. The
big
loser is manufacturing, which
starts
as the joint smallest
sector
and
sees
both real and projected falls.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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