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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The university campus landscape has been transformed in the last decade in drastic form. Some buildings had expanded, other areas were erased and some others are brand new constructions. The University arena had a completely different layout in 2010. Here we describe the new habitat in detail. Firstly the greater modification is the student accommodation, in 2010 there were 2 units of the student residence a story building of 6 floor and other of 3, nowadays there are 3 residences with 6 levels each. There are two new buildings to study, one for teaching arts and the other for science, the former one was in the same spot where the University office was. All the facilities for the students were concentrated in the west side of the campus. Lastly the lake which remain in the same spot but contains lower amount of green.
The university campus landscape has
been transformed
in the last decade in drastic form.
Some
buildings had expanded,
other
areas
were erased
and
some
others are
brand new
constructions. The University arena had a completely
different
layout in 2010.

Here we
describe
the new habitat in detail.
Firstly
the greater modification is the student accommodation, in 2010 there were 2 units of the student residence a story building of 6 floor and
other
of 3, nowadays there are 3 residences with 6 levels each.

There are two new buildings to study, one for teaching arts and the
other
for science, the former one was in the same spot where the University office was. All the facilities for the students
were concentrated
in the west side of the campus.
Lastly
the lake which remain in the same spot
but
contains lower amount of green.
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IELTS academic The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

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3 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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