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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The university campus landscape has been transformed in the last decade in drastic form. Some buildings had expanded, other areas were erased and some others are brand new constructions. The University arena had a completely different layout in 2010. Here we describe the new habitat in detail. Firstly the greater modification is the student accommodation, in 2010 there were 2 units of the student residence a story building of 6 floor and other of 3, nowadays there are 3 residences with 6 levels each. There are two new buildings to study, one for teaching arts and the other for science, the former one was in the same spot where the University office was. All the facilities for the students were concentrated in the west side of the campus. Lastly the lake which remain in the same spot but contains lower amount of green.

The university campus landscape has been transformed
 in the last decade in drastic form. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 buildings had expanded, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 areas were erased
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 others are ‘brand new’ seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: “brand-new”.brand-new
brand new
 constructions. The University arena had a completely This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 layout in 2010.

Here we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 the new habitat in detail. Firstly
 the greater modification is the student accommodation, in 2010 there were 2 units of the student residence a story building of 6 floor and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 of 3, nowadays there are 3 residences with 6 levels each.

There are two new buildings to study, one for teaching arts and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 for science, the former one was in the same spot where the University office was. All the facilities for the students were concentrated
 in the west side of the campus. Lastly
 the lake which remain in the same spot This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 contains lower amount of green. 