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The line graph shows the cost for watching films. The pie charts show the change in the percentage of market share represented in three forms.

The line chart shows some viewing information about cost for the pie charts while shows percentage of outline change in the market in three difference shape in watching movies. Overall, at the line chart, it is clear that cinema tickets have the highest cost and DVD while have legal download fewer than cost of cinema thicket, rent a DVD although more popular than went to cinema and surfing the internet to downloaded movies. It’s clear cinema ticket the most expensive that was starting up the 8$ in 2005, that was increased significantly limit of 14$ in 2011, in 2005 the attention to went to cinema was more than in2011. The cost for DVD cheaper than other shapes. the percentage of cost went up approximately 6$ in 2005 to 8$ in 2011. And it had most popular among the people in the both of years, In finally legal download was going up almost 8$ after 3 years had in addition increase moderately reached nearly 8. 5$ in 2007 but was dropping significantly about 6$ in much more than 2005.

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shows
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some
 viewing information about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
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shows
 percentage of outline This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the market in three difference shape in watching movies.

Overall
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clear
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cinema
 tickets have the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
 and DVD while have legal download fewer than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 thicket, rent a DVD although more popular than went to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 and surfing the internet to downloaded movies.

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clear
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 ticket the most expensive that was starting up the The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$8”.$8
8$
 in 2005, that was increased
significantly
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14$
 in 2011, in 2005 the attention to went to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
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cost
 for DVD cheaper than other shapes. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.The
the
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cost
 went up approximately The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$6”.$6
6$
 in 2005 to The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$8”.$8
8$
 in 2011. And it had most popular among the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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 legal download was going up almost The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$8”.$8
8$
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5$
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but
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 about The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: “$6”.$6
6$
 in much more than 2005. 