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The table shows the top five most successful olympians athletes, while the line graph compares how many medals won in all Olympics.

The table shows the top five most successful olympians athletes, while the line graph compares how many medals won in all Olympics. 11p3y
The table shows the top five most successful olympians athletes, while the line graph compares how many medals won in all Olympics. General Michael felt was the most successful winner of all time, while the USA won the most medals in the Olympic compared with the other countries. It can be seen on the table that the most number of awards belonged to m. p from the Us with the record of 22 medals in swimming, whereas Ole in Norway and Borys in USSR only won 13 medals in biathlon and gymnastics respectively, almost twice as low as M. p. Although 4 medals lower was won by Larysa than the first one, she still got a higher number of medals than the compettitor from the same country in gymnastics Nikolai. Turning to the line graph, the country won the most medals in all Olympics was the USA with the awards of over 2500 medals, nearly twice as far as the USSR which is in the second place. A lower number of medals awarded to the remaining 3 countries G, G. B and Italy for the figure of 800, 800 and 600 medals in that order, which means Itlaly won the lowest medals of the three countries.
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athletes, while the line graph compares how
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won in all Olympics.

General Michael felt was the most successful winner of all time, while the USA won the most
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medals
in the Olympic compared with the other countries.

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on the table that the most number of awards belonged to m. p from
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with the record of 22
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in swimming, whereas Ole in Norway and
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Borys
in USSR
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won 13
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in biathlon and gymnastics
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, almost twice as low as M. p. Although 4
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lower
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Larysa
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than the
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in gymnastics Nikolai.

Turning to the line graph, the
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won the most
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in all Olympics was the USA with the awards of over 2500
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,
nearly
twice as far as the USSR which is in the second place. A lower number of
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awarded to the remaining 3
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G, G. B and Italy for the figure of 800, 800 and 600
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in that order, which means
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of the three
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IELTS academic The table shows the top five most successful olympians athletes, while the line graph compares how many medals won in all Olympics.

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