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The chart shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with the world average class size in 2006.

The chart shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with the world average class size in 2006. KWkB6
The chart gives information about the average size of two different school in six nations and compares it with the whole world average size in 2006. Overall, the average size in primary schools were smaller than in lower secondary school. Moreover, South Korea has the largest class sizes in six countries. In detail, the average size in primary school of South Korea and Japan were similar with the figure was over 30 students. There were 25 students which was in 5-8 years old group of the United Kingdom and Mexico. In addition, class size in Denmark and Iceland was 17 and just bellow the world average of 19. Furthermore, the average in lower secondary school of South Korea stood at the first position with over 40 and followed by that of Mexico, was under 35. There were 33 pupils in each class in school for children 8-14 years old and about 10 lower than the United Kingdom. The figure for Denmark was significant smaller at 19 and near that of the world average. Iceland has the smallest class sizes in lower secondary school in six nations.
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