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The table illustrates the sales at a small restaurant located in downtown business during the week of October 7-13. Overall, throughout the week, sales during lunch and dinner were higher during the weekdays than on weekend and the restaurant make the most in Friday, both for lunch in dinner’s sale. Firstly, lunch avenue was roughly stable from Monday to Friday. As can be seen from the table, the selling of restaurant experienced a slightly increased from 2, 400 on Monday to 2, 595 on Wednesday before dropped to 2375 on Thursday. Especially, the sales for lunch reached the highest point of 2, 500 on Friday. However, on weekend days, there was a significant decreased by 1, 000 of the avenue and the minimum sale’s number were on Sunday, about 1, 550. Meanwhile, same as lunch avenue, sales for dinner showed an upward trend during weekdays but fell dramatically on weekends. The number of people paid for dinner from Monday til Friday steadily from a value of 3, 623 and the greatest number was on Friday. Yet, the dinner sales volume dropped to 2, 450 which is almost 2 times less than the amount of sales on Friday night.
The table illustrates the
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restaurant located in downtown business during the week of October 7-13.
Overall
, throughout the week,
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during lunch and
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were higher during the weekdays than on weekend and the restaurant
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the most in Friday, both for lunch in
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sale.

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from the table, the selling of restaurant experienced a
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dropped to 2375 on Thursday.
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for lunch reached the highest point of 2, 500 on Friday.
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, on weekend days, there was a significant decreased by 1, 000 of the avenue and the minimum
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number were on Sunday, about 1, 550.

Meanwhile, same as lunch avenue,
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for
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showed
an upward trend during weekdays
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on weekends. The number of
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from Monday til Friday
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from a value of 3, 623 and the greatest number was on Friday.
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volume dropped to 2, 450 which is almost 2 times less than the amount of
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on Friday night.
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