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Cinema visits for all age of groups

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Cinema visits for all age of groups The line chart illustrates the people who visit the cinema according to their age group. However, the table shows the attendance and frequency of visiting this cinema during a period of 5 years. Overall, it is clearly observed from the table that the number of people who attended this cinema increased during these years. It is worth mentioning that this cinema was popular among people who were 14-24 years old. In 1994, the figure for groups 14-24 years old stood at 12, while that of 25-34 years old was lower at 10. From this year until 2002, these figures decreased to approximately 10 and 8, respectively. Between 1994 and 1996, the number of people who were over 50 years old grew gradually by nearly 4, after which it declined to 5 in 1998. Also there was a rapid growth to 8 ( in 2002). Moreover, between 1994 and 1996, there was a steady rise of 5% in attendance followed by a fluctuation around 70% in the subsequent years. The frequency was 10. 7 in 1994, increasing to 11. 3 in 1996. This number remained constant at approximately 8. 3 from 1998 onwards.

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