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The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamford between 1985 and 2015. Instructions to follow • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task • Write at least 150 words

The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamford between 1985 and 2015. Instructions to follow • • AJ7ox
The two maps compare changes in plots of an industrial village in 30 years starting 1985. Overall, it is evident that the village’s industry grew over that period, and as a result, more residential areas were established. By 2015, the small factory that used to be on the northeast of the conjunction of the road and the river was demolished and replaced by a couple of small road inns. A new road leading to an industrial zone was constructed by 2015, which replaced the original roadside inns. Moreover, an industrial staff quarter was built to the west of the road to the industrial area. Some changes were also made to ease living in this area. First, new homes were built in the former empty lands of the east of Arlington Road on both sides of the river. Second, the wooden bridge over the Thames River was replaced by a steel one, and finally, new trees were planted on both sides of the road.
The two maps compare
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in plots of an
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industrial
village in 30 years starting 1985.

Overall
, it is evident that the village’s industry grew over that period, and
as a result
, more residential areas
were established
.

By 2015, the
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small
factory that
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used
to be on the northeast of the conjunction of the
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road
and the river
was demolished
and replaced by a couple of
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small
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road
inns. A new
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road
leading to an
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industrial
zone
was constructed
by 2015, which replaced the original roadside inns.
Moreover
, an
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industrial
staff quarter
was built
to the west of the
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road
to the
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industrial
area.

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Some
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changes
were
also
made to
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ease
living in this area.
First
, new homes
were built
in the former empty lands of the east of Arlington
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Road
on both sides of the river. Second, the wooden bridge over the Thames River
was replaced
by a steel one, and
finally
, new trees
were planted
on both sides of the
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road
.
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IELTS academic The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamford between 1985 and 2015. Instructions to follow • •

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