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The diagram explains the way of making sugar from sugar can.

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The diagram explains the way of making sugar from sugar can. Overall, it is clear that there are seven stages in the process from sugar canes to sugar get ready to use. Turning to details, process begins with sugar canes which are growing in about 12-18 months. After that, is a harvesting stage which can be done by machine or human. In third stage, crushing done. Sugar canes are poured in the machine from the top and they turn into juice and rush into a large container which is located under the machine. In the fourth step purifying juice with limestone filter is done. Added to that, in this level nectar is obtained. In the next step, which is evaporator, juice becomes syrup. Nectar is poured in a big pot they are placed on heat till makes more dense and syrup produced. In the sixth stage, process of change syrop to separates sugar crystals is done by centrifuge machine. At the final stage sugar crystals again pour in the massive bank store for dying and cooling. The process of making sugar from sugar cane is ends at this point. Undoubtedly after these rough steps sugars are packaged in factories and are ready to send throughout the city on the markets.
The diagram
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the way of making
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sugar
from
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sugar
can.

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, it is
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clear
that there are seven
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stages
in the
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process
from
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sugar
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canes
to
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sugar
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get
ready to
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use
.

Turning to
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details
,
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process
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begins
with
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sugar
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canes
which are growing in about 12-18 months. After that, is a harvesting
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stage
which can
be done
by
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machine
or human. In third
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stage
, crushing done.
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Sugar
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canes
are poured
in the
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machine
from the
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top and
they turn into juice and rush into a large container which
is located
under the
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machine
. In the fourth step purifying juice with limestone filter
is done
.
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Added
to that, in this level nectar
is obtained
. In the
next
step, which is evaporator, juice becomes syrup. Nectar
is poured
in a
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big
pot they
are placed
on heat till
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makes
more dense and syrup produced. In the sixth
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stage
,
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process
of
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change
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syrop
to separates
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sugar
crystals
is done
by centrifuge
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machine
. At the final
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stage
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sugar
crystals again pour in the massive bank store for dying and cooling. The
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process
of making
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sugar
from
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sugar
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cane
is ends at this point.
Undoubtedly
after these rough steps
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sugars
are packaged
in factories and are ready to
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send
throughout the city on the markets.

IELTS academic The diagram explains the way of making sugar from sugar can.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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