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Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that the percentage of households that didn't have car in a European country saw a decrease whereas the proportion of a country's family owning 1 car and 2 or more cars in the EU fluctuated.

Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that the percentage of households that didn't have car in a European country saw a decrease whereas the proportion of a country's family owning 1 car and 2 or more cars in the EU fluctuated. xgqyo
Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that the percentage of households that didn't have car in a European country saw a decrease whereas the proportion of a country's family owning 1 car and 2 or more cars in the EU fluctuated. Another key feature is that the lowest figure was recorded in the rate of households with 2 or more cars in a European country. In the first year studied, the percentage of families with no car made up 47%. In the next 30 years, this figure witnessed a significant decrease of about 20% from around 42% by 1981 and exactly 30% by 1991. The rate of households having 1 car and 2 or more cars in a country in Europe accounted for 35% and more than 15% in 1971, respectively. These figures, after experiencing a range of fluctuations, reached 43% and 28% in the final year surveyed
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in the EU fluctuated. Another key feature is that the lowest figure
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in a European country.

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made up 47%. In the
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30 years, this figure witnessed a significant decrease of about 20% from around 42% by 1981 and exactly 30% by 1991.

The rate of households having 1
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and 2 or more
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in a country in Europe accounted for 35% and more than 15% in 1971,
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. These figures, after experiencing a range of fluctuations, reached 43% and 28% in the final year
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IELTS academic Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that the percentage of households that didn't have car in a European country saw a decrease whereas the proportion of a country's family owning 1 car and 2 or more cars in the EU fluctuated.

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