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The char below shows the united states spending patterns betweenv1966 and 1996 . To summarize the information by selecting and reporting key charactrastics and comparing where appropriate.

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The pie chart provide information of spending ratiovin eight different expenditures between 1966 and 1996 by united states. Undoubtedly, the data calibrated by percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the food and cars experience upward trend and computer and book represent downward position. On the one hand, In 1966, the ratio of Book spending by us was 6% while in 1996 the data was 1%. Surprisingly, the proportion of food in 1966 and the data of cars in 1996 are approximately same. In 1996, the percentage of computer was 10% whereas in 1966 the data was at liw point 1%. Interestingly, the ratio of restaurants in 1996 was 14% and in 1966 the ratio was half of the previous value. On the other hand, however, In 1966 the ratio of expenditure petrol was 9% but in 1996 it was slightly fell 1% and accounted to 8%. Particularly, the data of cars in 1966 was 23% and in 1996 it was doubled from previous value. Furthermore, the proportion of restaurants and petrol in 1966 and 1996 was 7% and 8% respectively.
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different
expenditures between 1966 and 1996 by
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Undoubtedly
, the
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data
calibrated by percentage.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the food and cars experience upward trend and computer and book represent downward position.

On the one hand, In 1966, the
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ratio
of Book spending by us was 6% while in 1996 the
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data
was 1%.
Surprisingly
, the proportion of food in 1966 and the
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data
of cars in 1996 are approximately same. In 1996, the percentage of computer was 10% whereas in 1966 the
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data
was at
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liw
point 1%.
Interestingly
, the
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ratio
of restaurants in 1996 was 14% and in 1966 the
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ratio
was half of the previous value.

On the other hand
,
however
, In 1966 the
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ratio
of expenditure petrol was 9%
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but
in 1996 it was
slightly
fell 1% and accounted to 8%.
Particularly
, the
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data
of cars in 1966 was 23% and in 1996 it
was doubled
from previous value.
Furthermore
, the proportion of restaurants and petrol in 1966 and 1996 was 7% and 8%
respectively
.
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