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The graph shows the number of men and women who read books at the Christchurch Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The graph shows the number of men and women who read books at the Christchurch Public Library from 2011 to 2014. 0nx1n
The line graph presents data on the number of books read by each sex at the Christchurch public library from 2011 to 2014. Overall, women initially prefer reading books. However, male readers showed further interests in books later, which was the opposite in the case of the women readers. In the beginning, during 2011, more books were read by female, 2, 000 than male, 5, 000 respectively in this library. In the following two years, there was a surge in the number of books enjoyed by both sexes. While there was a slight rise for the book read by women, men's, on the contrary, rose at a significant pace during this period. In 2013, the number of books read by both male and female met at an equidistant point of around 10, 000 books. But in 2014, there was an opposite reaction towards reading by both men and women. On one side, men reached a peak at around 14000 book reads by them, women readers, on the other side, read a significantly fewer number of books, seven thousand only.
The line graph presents data on the
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by each sex at the Christchurch public library from 2011 to 2014.

Overall
,
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initially
prefer reading
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.
However
, male readers
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showed
further
interests in
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later, which was the opposite in the case of the
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women
readers.

In the beginning, during 2011, more
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books
were
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read
by female, 2, 000 than male, 5, 000
respectively
in this library. In the following two years, there was a surge in the
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number
of
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books
enjoyed by both sexes. While there was a slight rise for the
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book
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read
by
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women
,
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men
's,
on the contrary
, rose at a significant pace during this period.

In 2013, the
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by both male and female met at an equidistant point of around 10, 000
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books
.
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in 2014, there was an opposite reaction towards reading by both
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men
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. On one side,
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reached a peak at around 14000
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by them,
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readers, on the other side,
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a
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, seven thousand
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