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The map shows changes to Frenton

The map shows changes to Frenton GrAqL
A glance at the maps reveals the information about the alternatives which occurred in the particular area namely Frenton from 1990 to 2012. In general, Frenton had undergoes various transformation during the given year, whereas some Amenities was demolished and developed. Looking to the details, the location of school, hospital and library was unchanged, however the area of hospital was expanded. whereas, in north direction there were playing fields with trees in 1990, whilst it was converted with blocks of flats in 2012. Afterthat, trees were chopped down in South West side and a new technopark was constructed at same place. Moving further, after 22 year, new flat were developed in north east side. Beside, there was a high street in the center of area in both years. Then, area of cafe and park was renovated and hotel and golf course was established. Notably, the name of threatre was switched with cinema.
A glance at the maps reveals the information about the alternatives which occurred in the particular
area
namely
Frenton
from 1990 to 2012.

In general
,
Frenton
had undergoes various transformation during the
given
year, whereas
some


Amenities
was
demolished and developed.

Looking to the
details
, the location of school, hospital and library
was unchanged
,
however
the
area
of hospital
was expanded
.
whereas
, in north direction there were playing fields with trees in 1990, whilst it
was converted
with blocks of flats in 2012.
Afterthat
, trees
were chopped
down in South West side and a new
technopark
was constructed
at same place.

Moving
further
, after 22 year, new flat
were developed
in
north east
side. Beside, there was a high street in the center of
area
in both years. Then,
area
of
cafe
and park
was renovated
and hotel and golf course
was established
.
Notably
, the name of
threatre
was switched
with cinema.
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