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The map shows changes to Frenton

The map shows changes to Frenton GrAqL

A glance at the maps reveals the information about the alternatives which occurred in the particular area namely Frenton from 1990 to 2012. In general, Frenton had undergoes various transformation during the given year, whereas some Amenities was demolished and developed. Looking to the details, the location of school, hospital and library was unchanged, however the area of hospital was expanded. whereas, in north direction there were playing fields with trees in 1990, whilst it was converted with blocks of flats in 2012. Afterthat, trees were chopped down in South West side and a new technopark was constructed at same place. Moving further, after 22 year, new flat were developed in north east side. Beside, there was a high street in the center of area in both years. Then, area of cafe and park was renovated and hotel and golf course was established. Notably, the name of threatre was switched with cinema.

A glance at the maps reveals the information about the alternatives which occurred in the particular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
namely
Possible spelling mistake found.TrentonBrenton
Frenton
 from 1990 to 2012.

In general
, Possible spelling mistake found.TrentonBrenton
Frenton
 had undergoes various transformation during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 year, whereas This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some


Amenities You should probably use: "are" or "were".arewere
was
 demolished and developed.

Looking to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, the location of school, hospital and library was unchanged
, however
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of hospital was expanded
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhereas
whereas
, in north direction there were playing fields with trees in 1990, whilst it was converted
 with blocks of flats in 2012. Possible spelling mistake found.After that
Afterthat
, trees were chopped
 down in South West side and a new Possible spelling mistake found.techno park
technopark
was constructed
 at same place.

Moving further
, after 22 year, new flat were developed
 in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 side. Beside, there was a high street in the center of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 in both years. Then, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and park was renovated
 and hotel and golf course was established
. Notably
, the name of Possible spelling mistake found.threat re
threatre
was switched
 with cinema. 