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The given map illustrates the city

The given map illustrates the city 551EV
The double map concentrates data by modifications on center of Islip while this posture corresponds to different 2 years, 2010 and 2015. Overall, initially, the basic texture of the town was shallow, but, 5 years later, this center had enriched with various socilities as the crovded place. This view had observed by renovation into mainly circle road(double carriageway) In 2010, Islip had main road that shops encompassed its northern and northern teritories. And also housing areas located in the south, and Park revealed it's own side throw the east. Meanwhile, school appropriated to southern west part of center, and village situated in the north. The center demonstrated many comforts for livelihood in the final cycle. Bus station, shopping centre and car park constructed in the north when new housing existed in both road's side, and way (for pedestrians) appeared. In the south, alterations almost did not observed. On the other hand, all buildings settled in enclosed way except for the school and housing (belonged to the south).
The double map concentrates data by modifications on center of
Islip
while this posture corresponds to
different
2 years, 2010 and 2015.

Overall
,
initially
, the basic texture of the town was shallow,
but
, 5 years later, this center had enriched with various
socilities
as the

crovded
place. This view had observed by renovation into
mainly
circle road(double carriageway)

In 2010,
Islip
had main road that shops encompassed its northern and northern
teritories
. And
also
housing areas located in the south, and Park revealed
it's
own
side throw the east. Meanwhile, school appropriated to southern west part of center, and village situated in the north.

The center demonstrated
many
comforts for livelihood in the final cycle. Bus station, shopping
centre
and car park constructed in the north when new housing existed in both road's side, and way (for pedestrians) appeared. In the south, alterations almost did not
observed
.
On the other hand
, all buildings settled in enclosed way
except for
the school and housing (belonged to the south).
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6.0
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