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The chart show coffee consumption vy age and percentage od population in Austraila in three years -1995,2001 and 2004

The chart show coffee consumption vy age and percentage od population in Austraila in three years -1995, 2001 and 2004 j937w
The table chart depicts the information about the proportion of people in Australia who had taken coffee by age groups over the given time period of three years. The noticable change can be seen in the age of 45-54 the highest perportion of people prefer to coffee in australia that was sharply incressed throughout the year 9% in 1995 next with 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2004. However, 75+ of elder took less interst in coffee only 3%to 6% in 2000. Moreover, the demand of coffee in both ages middle and youngers age was the nearly the same age 12% over the 14 years between 1995, 2000 and 2004 and upward trend seen in conumsed of coffee 45 to 54 which was 9% to 16% respectively. Overall, the use of coffee in australia rose up in 2004 than previous year.
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IELTS academic The chart show coffee consumption vy age and percentage od population in Austraila in three years -1995, 2001 and 2004

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