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the table shows the percentage of students participation in sports in the last year.

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Illustrated here is the table comparing the ratio of various classes of students who participated in sports consisting of football, rugby, table tennis, tennis, and others in the last year. Overall, it is noticeable that the football game was the most popular sport among them. However, an opposite trend is observed that students enjoyed playing tennis the least. Interestingly, although the football, being the most famous, the undergraduate joined other sports instead of its. Focusing on the football, rugby and table tennis amateur, the football was interested the most, holding 48% of elementary, 35% of junior high school, 32% of senior high school and 21% of undergraduate. Moreover, approximately two fifth of each got involved in rugby game. It is important to highlight that the table tennis was participated by a small number of students, just under 10%. Turning to the remaining sports, while the other three genre of students engaged in tennis game, around one quarters, the elementary played its only 5%, being smaller than three times that of others. Additionally, the figures of students who loved playing basketball are around 15% of students in both high schools. Interestingly, the majority of undergraduate participated in other sports, just under three tenth.
Illustrated here is the
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table
comparing the ratio of various classes of
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students
who participated in
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sports
consisting of
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football
, rugby,
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table
tennis, tennis,
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and others
in the last year.

Overall
, it is noticeable that the
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football
game was the most popular
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sport
among them.
However
, an opposite trend
is observed
that
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students
enjoyed playing tennis the least.

Interestingly
, although the
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football
, being the most
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famous
, the undergraduate
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joined
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other
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sports
instead
of its.

Focusing on the
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football
, rugby and
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table
tennis amateur, the
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football
was interested
the most, holding 48% of elementary, 35% of junior high school, 32% of senior high school and 21% of undergraduate.
Moreover
, approximately two fifth of each
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got
involved in rugby game. It is
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important
to highlight that the
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table
tennis
was participated
by a
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small
number of
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students
,
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just
under 10%.

Turning to the remaining
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sports
, while the
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other
three
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genre
of
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students
engaged in tennis game, around one quarters, the elementary played its
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only
5%, being smaller than three times that of others.
Additionally
, the figures of
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students
who
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loved
playing basketball are around 15% of
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students
in both high schools.
Interestingly
, the majority of undergraduate participated in
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other
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sports
,
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just
under three
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tenth
.
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